Song - A Comment on War

[commalot]

This is my second piece. I put it together today. Comments welcome.

David Merrill http://media.putfile.com/A-Comment-On-War-Master

[lukpcn]

Hi....

I have couple of thoughts: (listening on Headphones)

1) levels are very odd.... some instruments are very loud - like the snare at the beginning and some are too soft (IMHO)

2) I think that some sounds should have some release times longer because they sound like the loops that have no tail...

But the idea is very good.... the piece itself is very complex in style (don't know how to call it in elngilish, sorry :o )