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NewComposer
08-16-2001, 03:18 PM
Hello,
http://dev.mdpad.com/images/inspiration.mp3 (\"http://dev.mdpad.com/images/inspiration.mp3\")


I have spent sometime reading this board and I decided to compose a song. I would love some feedback and tips on string writing.

Thanks a lot!

NewComposer
Ken-P
08-16-2001, 03:41 PM
I think that you should have used \"pan.\"
I feel that every instrument except percussions sits at center.
Simon Ravn
08-16-2001, 04:43 PM
One word: TUNING!!! http://www.northernsounds.com/ubb/NonCGI/images/icons/smile.gif But composition-wise it seems like you are doing well - but what\'s with the crackling - sounds like some of it comes from a record...
NewComposer
08-17-2001, 09:13 AM
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One word: TUNING!!! http://www.northernsounds.com/ubb/NonCGI/images/icons/smile.gif But composition-wise it seems like you are doing well - but what\'s with the crackling - sounds like some of it comes from a record...

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