This is a short composition I sketched out last week. It was a beautiful spring day and I was listening to pieces here in the "listening room" inspired by the coming spring. Since I am at times not very original, I could think of no other title than Spring. In reality I wanted to post something so that I could feel like I belonged to the community and, most important, so I could learn from the insights of others. So please critique the piece-from voice leading to rendering to form to whatever. I have no illusions as to my place in the universe of composers. I have pretty thick skin and I am determined to learn as much as I can. I will learn nothing in a vacuum.
This was mixed on my studio monitors. I am not sure if I should be mixing for typical computer speakers or just mixing on the monitors. I also am unsure how to vary the tempo to achieve a more authentic sound. I experimented in a couple of places in a very subtle way. Any thoughts on that would be greatly appreciated. Thanks.
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