Re: Need fresh ears on this piece for Architectural/Interior Design firm
It\'s awfully hard to say without seeing the video. If the video pace is fairly fast, and if the focus is on the design/building of something new, this may be right, but the imaginary video in my head had a slower tempo. To me, your piece is all about an optimistic future. When I think Architecture Digest, the message I see is \"You don\'t need to hope for the future. You are here.\"
I\'d say that\'s my much-less-than-two-cents-worth, since I\'m not just writing about music, but writing about music about architecture that I\'ve never seen.