Frederick, Sounds pretty good. I don\'t know if you\'ll get many comments on this forum. There\'s a bit of culling and elitism going on. That\'s probably a good (and natural) thing to happen. Only the big dogs get comments here. And probably rightfully so. They\'ve been here and have owned this forum for a long time before us noobies found it.
Since I am a self-confessed noobie, please take these comments with a grain of salt.
A lot of notes just bang on or bang off. I\'m missing a finesse to the music. Maybe it needs a better (or more) reverb tail to soften the blows of those notes.
I think some of the parts could come on softer (it is a sunrise piece after all) and go out softer so there\'s a crescendo in the notes.