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    New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    I suppose i could improve this if i had a modwheel, but for now i can only use the mouse.

    Comments of improvement or anything else please!

    http://medlem.spray.se/ericvega/Crackbaby%20-%20Walking%20on%20the%20attic.MP3

    Rightclick and save or click and then wait for 5 sec and then click on Crackbaby - Walking on the attic.

    Instruments used:

    Harp
    Bass Pizz
    Cello Pizz
    Cello 2, 3
    Viola Pizz
    Viola Solo
    Stradi ens1,2,3
    Guarneri solo
    Guarneri pizz
    Galio(?) solo
    Gali Pizz
    Oboe Classical
    I panned the stradi to the right to improve frequencyballance.
    All pizz and harp are for the rythm.
    Stradi ens makes one melody
    oboe, cello and gagli makes another
    guarn and viola solo makes the last one
    got that? [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

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    Re: New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    the link you provided doesn\'t work :/

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    Re: New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    Originally posted by Nino Mojo:
    the link you provided doesn\'t work :/
    <font size=\"2\" face=\"Verdana, Arial\">Thanks mate. Now it does. I missed the .mp3 thing [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

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    Re: New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    Not bad ! [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

    But in my opinion you should try to add variation to your pizzis as they behave the same for the whole piece. It probably makes your piece sounding more repetitive than it is. Varying or sometimes muting the pizzicatos could make your music breath a lot more in my opinion [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

    But that\'s just my opinion [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

    Other than that I like this kind of italian or baroque mood or I don\'t know what feeling the violin gives [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

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    Re: New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    There\'s some nice stuff hiding in here that I wish I could hear better!

    A simple mix tweak might improve it dramatically - after the pizzi\'s are introduced, drop them way down/back as an almost subliminal texture, and let the strings/woods weave their magic out front.

    Trond

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    Re: New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    There is something about this that I like enough to make me bother to write saying that I like it. I agree with Nino and Dnortana though.

    Lets hear it again

    Frank

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    Re: New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    Hehe.. you got me [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]
    I totally forgot that! I played the pizzicato for one bar and then copied it, switched notes to fit other chords and multiplied it for the other instruments. I really should play the whole piece by hand and as you rightfully said, ad more variation. That variation will probably ad more expression for the violins and the other strings.

    Thanks for the comment! Higly appriciated!

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    Re: New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    So where\'s the music man ? [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]
    We wanna hear more of it [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

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    Re: New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    Pretty cool, I would work on the mix a little more.
    By the way, I really am the same Kunio, but I forgot my !@%^&$ password!

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    Re: New Stringie Thingie - comments please! (link is working - sorry!)

    I\'ve been away and now i got sick. When the heat in my head dissapears, there will be music!

    Thank you all for your tips, I will put a lot of work in it .. when im well [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]

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