Okay, then... nevermind the above post. It must have been the computer I was on, because I tried downloading it at home and got the entire thing.
So, anyway... overall I thought the piece was very pretty. The transition to the piano half was very well down, although you might want to look at the middle strings--they sound rather abrupt. Also, in the first half I think the flute could possibly use a little embellishment. Of course, these are only my opinions. I can easily hear the piece as the background to a clip from a fantasy movie.
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I tried as you suggested Gary and added more ambience. I feared adding too much reverb could be interpreted as masking imperfections ... However the strings part in the second half sounds a lot smoother now, I guess less abrupt as FossMan said : http://jgsirac.free.fr/public/gardens-b.mp3
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