Hi Dajo and welcome,
the piece was fine. What I liked was that you did make a good use of your motive theme and developed it little throughout the piece. Many users which posts demo here, don\'t develop their motive/themes enough for my taste.
However, if I should pick out something which was less good was that you didn\'t explore the harmony world enough. Try to modulate to different keys etc. then your pieces really get life of its own.
Anyway, good job and keep them coming! [img]images/icons/wink.gif[/img]