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    My first composition

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    Hello,

    This is my first piece of orchestral music (Ultimate Strings & SAM Horns) and I\'d like to hear your opinon.

    http://www.prozone.sk/vlado/after_the_war.mp3

    Thanks a lot

    Vlado Hudec

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    Re: My first composition

    Vlado,

    It\'s short but I like it, except for the ending where strings and bones are unison.
    Funny how these oldtimer strings still deliver.


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    Alex Cremers

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    Re: My first composition

    Hi Vlado,
    very nice harmonies! Sounds interesting. What is personnally disturbing me is that we are in a tonal harmonie at the beginning and then in a modal harmonie (d minor without c sharp). Not a good idea I think - use c sharp. Another suggestion could be a *very* simple theme, a melodie, like a scale that is ascending or something, like this maybe it\'s a bit empty. At your place I\'d keep the harminies and maybe work out some instrumental colors with it, or contrast of mass. F ex when V VI arrives (A7 B) more orchestral mass,
    anyway, sympathic little music [img]images/icons/smile.gif[/img]
    Markus.

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    Re: My first composition

    I like this..for a first piece it is very very good...

    Short and simple , yes....but also emotional, and has a nice color as well...
    plus it has nothing to do with J Williams.. [img]images/icons/wink.gif[/img]

    good work...

    Alex

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