Great composition Adam. It\'ll be great for the game.
The only problem I have is with the mix. It\'s well-balanced and the levels seem good but I think it sounds a bit...overdone (for lack of a better term).
When the percussion comes in 20 seconds in or so, the piece awakens and fills the spectrum. But the only thing I can really hear filling out the low-end is the percussion. This makes all the other instruments seem thin by comparison. When the perc comes in it would be nice to \"feel\" the low brass as well as hear it.
Did you do any roll-offs or high-pass Eq\'ing on the brass?
It\'s really a tough call. A lot of the higher-end is balanced really well and get about as close to \"real\" sounding as you can get with libraries. That kinda accentuates the low end problems.
I\'m just being nit-picky. I have a feeling that maybe you\'re not using really accurate monitors, which will lead to over EQ\'ing sometimes. Have you referenced it on different systems yet? I\'d suggest doing some more of that and fine-tuning the low-end.
Don\'t let me freak you out though. It\'ll pass just fine the way it is.