He writes "Just now I make first piece on GPO. If you have time, please listen. And if you advise me something I am so happy."
Please listen and I will forward your comments to Yu.
I liked the orchestration a lot. You really added a lot of color and variety. I liked how you built it up towards the end with the strings and then the brass. It almost reminded me of "switched on Bach", only sounded more orchestral.
Excellent orchestration and the composition is superb. The only recommendations I could make are that the strings around a 1:40 could use some legato and also the repeated notes of the winds have that dreaded 'machine gun effect.' Also, the mix is very well seated, but the overall volume of the piece was lower than most. I don't know what else to say. This was a very well defined and listenable composition.