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  1. #1

    Some more critiques please.

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    Ok here are some more demos, please tell me what you think. BTW I suck at mastering so bare with me.

    Battle theme: http://www.northernsounds.net/userup...4cbf962927.mp3
    Battle theme 6: http://www.northernsounds.net/userup...4cc3a2c080.mp3
    Haliphen's Theme: http://www.northernsounds.net/userup...4ccce3e7a4.mp3
    The Rider DEMO 2: http://www.northernsounds.net/userup...4cbbb70c4a.mp3

    Thanks in advance,

  2. #2

    Re: Some more critiques please.

    Compositionally, these are pretty good. Some of the french horn articulations used in Battle theme 6 didn't quite seem natural. And the trumpet lines in Battle theme sounded artificial as well. I think a lot of the problem may be that everything sounds really dry. You need more reverb to my ears. The instruments don't sound like they exist in a space. Some reverb would add a lot of ambiance and tie everything together a bit more. As for the french horn parts, try getting them to flow together smoothly and naturally. This can be very challenging, I know. But it's what's keeping a good piece from sounding great.

    Keep it up! You've done well.

  3. #3

    Re: Some more critiques please.

    Thanks for the feedback Brady, I am still using the free version of sam trumpets, and they don't sound very realistic to me. As for the battle themes I didn't apply any reverb to them since they were just showing the guy I am making music for what they sound like.

  4. #4

    Re: Some more critiques please.

    Hello all,

    Update I have another piece that I also wanted to show but it was just approved, so please someone give it a listen and give me some feedback

    Royal Entrance FINAL (this is a new version)

    Thanks in advance,

    Adam Frechette

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