A short post-battle-ish song. I'm very satisfied with the melodies and automation on the volume. I noticed that I have a "problem", I find it hard to make pieces that are longer than 3 minutes. Anyways, feedback is appreciated, as allways.
As far as length of your pieces, sometimes it just takes time for one to aggregate musical ideas. I think you have a nice start here and I would recommend that you sit back and consider "where" the piece might go with that start -- in other words, variations and development. Also, to me, what you have here is straining for a couple of other elements: a few dramatic "spaces" in the action and some additional underscoring instruments. (For example, some supporting strings in a repeat would bring additional character to your statements; a well-placed bass drum might signal "finality", etc.)
In general, I would have to comment also that for a "lament" piece, the levels are way up. This sort of piece works better when you make the listener slightly strain to hear it (particularly the beginning and then end, I've found).
I hope this helps ... regards ... KevinKauai
P.S. The "file name" of a piece need not be the exact title -- especially where punctuation and URL naming restrictions clash. (I was trying to bring an MP3 file called something like "Etude #3.mp3" into one of my websites and FrontPage kept complaining about "illegal URL -- file not imported" until I removed the "#". Turns out -- duh! -- that "#" is the URL character for a bookmark within a page!) Also I would encourage you to stick on the MP3 "tags" claiming copyright. It's a good habit to get into. (Generally, whatever you are using to derive the MP3 will have a "properties" item -- typically reached by a right mouse click -- where you can set "title", "composer", "copyright" and the like.)
Another keeper Ivar. I don't know. I like the overall level of the piece. Some are too low for my tastes. Of course I listen to everything loud, so loud my ears bleed and lament. Anyways, sounds like its panned too much to the left to me, but I aint listening on $3000 monitors either and this is causing some clipping in the left channel.