hmmm, it's unusual for me to post music on forum, but I want to hear more comment to make myself to having improvment, this is the song detail:
Song Name: symphony number 1 - 1. Looking at the Dreaming Sky
Composer: Thomas Graham Lau
Sample library: Sonic Implants String library, Project SAM Horn (far), Gigapiano (aka Yamaha Grand piano library ).
Download Link: http://sml.dyndns.org/files/number1.mp3
Please give me some comment about this song, Thanks
Well, I will not give a technical oppinion because I am now at home and my speakers here are really bad.
I like the mood of your composition, its very introspective and imaginative, and this are strong qualities in my oppinion. For the first movement of a Symphony however, sounds like something is missing. Probably its only to short, if you develop the main theme into a longer movement the musical ideas will really grow and reach a higher ground.
I guess I jumped the gun to listen to your music and did not realize you were writing a symphony. I hate to criticize because really who am I to judge your work but since you are asking for opinions I must say that this works needs more development of the theme, more variation and modulation. It is to repetitive, not that repetition is a bad thing as mainly all music is based on it. Now you've attacked a composition like a "Symphony". What do you define as a "Symphony"?