It was a great start. As an aircraft nut I was looking forward to what you came up with. Unfortunately I find that all the pieces I've tried to listen to at Acid planet, stutter and come to a stop. I look forward to hearing it later.
Thanks for the reply. I just spent the last couple days refining this piece and remixing it. I think it is alot more of what I wanted now. I agree that there were parts that werent dynamic enough. Hopefully this new mix has taken care of that. The same link has the updated file. I would really enjoy some feedback for better or worse. Thanks everyone.