I would be really grateful for your feedback and comments on this piece. particularly around it's originality and sound quality (not sure about the middle bit when the strings come in).
Mike, really good Job,
It seems to hear something that remind me to a Journey in to the country, in the middle of the summer.
There is much originality in your piece and the sound quality is quite good, what I would do is to add some 'verb and a little modulation in the left hand of the piano.
It seems to go a little bit too "mechanically" (just my feeling).
Originally Posted by Problem is
Problem is, when you've played the song you are writing so many times, you don't know if you have heard it somewhere else!!.
It is the same thing I feel when I try to write a piece. Unfortunately (or fortunately) a lot of music has been already wrote and played, but you can choose at what kind of musicians or music you can inspire, and from here developing your own "music" with your own style.
However your music has is proper style and until now it doesn't remind me to other pieces already listened.
Keep on writing, this work is very good.
Best of luck,
You've got some great melodies here! I enjoyed it. As has been said, I think it might sound a wee bit better with just a little reverb and perhaps more modulation editing in the violin and the oboe (or english horn?)