Heeeeeeeeeyyyyyyyyyyyyy J.A.B. maybe tweak down the reverb somewhat so it carries the instruments not over shadows. Other than that I though it was quite remarkable! I do have one very big complaint.... IT WAS TOO SHORT!
Also, would be neat if you started it off with the string basses doing that chromatic run. Heck, you know what I mean, yes?
Twister is like my all time favorite movie!