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    2 Songs

    Hi,

    I made 2 songs last night, guess I was in the mood. Both are not totally done and they was both recorded off sibelius directly using gpo. Toune21 is just piano and kinda first attempt to a mini classical song(and I am no expert!) Toune22 is a oboe 2 violin and piano.

    http://www.rentgame.ca/song/toune21.mp3
    http://www.rentgame.ca/song/toune22.mp3

    Comments are always appreciated! (bad or good!)

    Martin

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    Quote Originally Posted by Saldor
    Hi,

    I made 2 songs last night, guess I was in the mood. Both are not totally done and they was both recorded off sibelius directly using gpo. Toune21 is just piano and kinda first attempt to a mini classical song(and I am no expert!) Toune22 is a oboe 2 violin and piano.

    http://www.rentgame.ca/song/toune21.mp3
    http://www.rentgame.ca/song/toune22.mp3

    Comments are always appreciated! (bad or good!)

    Martin

    Saldor,
    very interesting these pieces.
    The first piano piece is very good.
    The second one is at the same way really well done.
    On the composition side nothing to say, if not my congratulations.!
    I like the use of the piano you do, but I would like to hear a left hand more "delicate" on the keys. Sometime it seem difficult to hear the melody on the right hand.
    About the violin, there are some passages in which it seems to listen a real violin. Cool!!
    So, anyway you have done two good compositions.
    With some little modifications to the orchestration part (at least for me) you will get two very beautiful pieces.
    I remind you that this is only my little opinion.
    Best of luck,
    Roberto

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    Re: 2 Songs

    Hi beach,

    Thanks for the comments, for the left hand you talk about the toune21? (I have never found titles for my songs!).

    Saldor

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