excellent as all of your stuff! I really dig your style man.
just some minor nitpick remarks from me:
-the strings could be more dynamic. they're somehow flat in the background. some more decent evolving volume curves would be good.
-the first loop could get perhaps a little intrusive if you let the loop run a few times. I personally would let run the first 5/10 sec only with the pizz accompaniment and then begin with the theme. sure all a matter of taste.
but all in all a very good result. you can really be happy to have the opportunity to do such jobs....
Aaahh thanks !
Sorry for the late reponse ! I was quite busy recently :/
Ha I see what you mean, more expression. Yep, I think it's definitely obvious that I rushed and wrote the music like a pig . I'd love to try and make my violins more expressive the way you showed me (really helpful thanks!!) The sad thing is: The client rejected all the work for this project, so I don't think I'm gonna ever touch them :/ However for my new pieces I will definitely tke your advice and bring more careful editing and expression. Thanks again
But man, I'm really impressed at how you managed to isolate the violins from the other instrument without degrading the sound ! That's really impressive to me, and also very helpful (Are you a sound engineer ? )