I haven't had a lot of time to work on my music recently, but have done a short project on Mozart's "Eine Kleine Nacht Musik" in honor of his 250th birthday. Like my other posted project of Vivaldi's Four Season "Spring" I was aiming a realistic strings with this one. Both can be found at:
This is a great job. I agree with David, that you did an excellent job on the string work.
I might also suggest that you bring the layered instruments a little closer to each other. Like David mentioned, it seems a little wide. It comes across as though there are two different spaces with different instruments in each. I hope that makes sense .
Thanks for the comments. Yeah, it would make sense to have it sound more like listening from the audience rather than the conductor. I start out with the wide sound so that I can clearly hear the contribution of each section (like the conductor) as I work on them. I guess now I need the performance version. Headphones would certainly accentuate the effect. Kind of in one ear...... and in the other!