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    Exclamation Work in progress

    Here's a WIP I've been tinkering with for a few hours. A quick upload before I hit the town! Comments are more than welcome!

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    Re: Work in progress

    Gorgeous melodic work in this, and astute use of
    articulation (flute) in places. Lovely string work.

    I realize this is a work-in-progress, of course...
    so I am hesitant to go overboard on specifics.
    I might suggest thinking more about modulation
    and greater variation, perhaps... though I'm
    certain you intend to develop further in those
    areas; the material is so good, I doubt you
    could deny the lure of it... lol.

    Excellent start on this!

    David
    www.DavidSosnowski.com
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    Re: Work in progress

    Thank you, etLux, my one and only fan!

    Quote Originally Posted by etLux
    I realize this is a work-in-progress, of course... so I am hesitant to go overboard on specifics. I might suggest thinking more about modulation and greater variation, perhaps... though I'm certain you intend to develop further in those areas; the material is so good, I doubt you could deny the lure of it... lol.
    Modulation and variation are the things I'm worst at. My only strength, I think, is melodies, so I usually go overboard with those. Every piece I do end up sounding like an overture or something...

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    Re: Work in progress

    Lovely work, in and out of dark and lighter monents with a solomn feeling about it. Does your WIP have a title, or one that you are contemplating?

    Gary

    www.garybricault.com

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