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    Unsure what the title is

    I'm working on this new thing. It's not finished, but you could give me pointers on this too. I started it about 2 days ago. I feel like it needs something. Help!!!!

    http://www.sibeliusmusic.com/cgi-bin...&scoreid=89038

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    Re: Unsure what the title is

    Do you have a direct link to an mp3 of your music? People don't want to have to fill out forms and join anything--at least I don't.

    Your link takes us to a web page that asks for our e-mail address and a password and then we have to officially join the group just to listen to someone's music. No way!

    Larry A.
    Larry G. Alexander
    www.alexandermusic.com

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    Re: Unsure what the title is

    Pointers? I'll give you just one:

    Get back to work on this, and keep writing with
    the same quality.

    This is excellent work! Compositionally strong,
    plenty of drive and direction, well nuanced,
    highly evident musicianship in the rendering,
    and a strongly engaging opening.

    More!

    Best,

    David
    www.DavidSosnowski.com
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    Re: Unsure what the title is

    Benjamin,

    That's some extraordinary writing! Very purposeful and energetic piece. And the arranging is par excellence. You're off to a great start and please finish and let us hear how it develops.

    Thanks for sharing this with us.

    Gary Garritan

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    Re: Unsure what the title is

    Ben,

    Wow...the only thing wrong with it is that it is not finished!!! Very strong writing and heading in a direction with great possibilities. And you have a great command of using the GPO as well.

    Keep up the great work.

    Gary

    www.garybricault.com

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