I know I posted about it before, but I have finally gotten around to finishing it. Although, I'm going to tweak it one last time (remove a couple of parts that didn't quite work...), this is for the most part, the final version. I decided to just make a new topic instead of looking back through older topics for the original.
I have listened to the original. I know what this updated version I posted sounds like, but I didn't listen to this one as a whole. I just didn't have the time to spend the full 7 minutes listening to it last night so I just went through and checked the parts I changed. But I finally listened to it as a whole just now and have to say there are only about 2 notes I am not happy with.
Colton J. Provias
Film Score Composer, Location Sound Mixer, and Sound Editor
Full-stack Web Developer
I was pleased with the first winds notes which promised a well-done rendering. Actually the strings are not really on par.
You have good sense for the hookline melody, but I would recommend more inherent dynamics to the orchestra instruments and also more adjustion between the groups. The drums are much too loud (are parts of it a live recording?) and fall out of the mix, as do some instruments.
The overall architecture is not very clear and would need some more thightening.