Even though this is cleaner, I think that I like the fuller sound of the larger ensemble personally. There is more opportunity to work with dynamics and some ability to trade off parts in a live performance.
You may want to recheck your input around 1:05 as I believe that is a missed placed note in the upper voice.
Thanks for listening, Fred;.
Wow! Just out of the distant past for me.
Transcribing a JS Bach piece is a voice of discovery. Moving with each line in sometimes predictable ways and other times, unexpected.
My favorite Composer to transcribe.