I really like this! Really draws you in - I'm ready for an adventure! The legato brass stuff seemed a bit static and less "human" but I absolutely love the rhythmic stuff with the flutes. Best of luck finding a home for it.
I like this! It's always interesting when you hear a technique that you've never really explored, just as I am now; and I'm thinking, 'I just don't do enough with pizz strings!' I like the momentum the rhythm provides.
Overall this sounds great. I agree that you could get a bit more mileage out of the mod wheel on the legato brass lines. Just a bit more implied direction in the phrase will make it sing!
There's a lot of charisma in this piece, and I hope the game company chooses it! Nice work!
This is too nice for a game or ringtones or something "modern" as used today in normal life. OK, when sold to a gaming industry you have some more money to spend for making music..... but [look at Schubert, most of the time he didn't even had money to 'rent' a piano]..... what to do? Just maintain your originality and keep on writing.