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    Awakening-External World

    This is one of my first songs with GPO, I've used finale 2007 with Finale GPO
    ( only some instruments from the Full GPO), I made this piece as soundtrack for an imaginary RPG, it is composed by two moment (Awakening and External World a.k.a. the world map theme )...

    please tell me what do you think about this song, because is my first work with a "real" orchestra, and i tried to use some of the learnings from the RK course...

    here's the link: http://downgrade89.altervista.org/Ri...do_esterno.mp3


    PS:
    the song is played (and recorded) with an old computer, so i'm sorry if there are some errors of playing (instruments muted, slowing, or other things)...i'll try to correct them later

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    Re: Awakening-External World

    Hi -

    I couldn't get the link to work...

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    Re: Awakening-External World

    Hey, link worked fine for me. Very well done piece. Enjoyed the peaceful and well orchestrated opening themes and use of chromaticism and choice of wind instruments with the harp. Your crescendo worked well and sounds great with the brass and timpani. The repeat of the opening melody with the strings was a great idea and well executed. Nice pizzicato play and powerful ending... Your off to a great start with the GPO. Please keep posting....

    Michael
    "...Wiktor's a Jekyll-Hyde personality..." - Lycos Music
    http://www.miserymadebeautiful.com

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    Re: Awakening-External World

    Quote Originally Posted by originalblat
    Hi -

    I couldn't get the link to work...
    try to tipe this

    http://downgrade89.altervista.org/Ri...do_esterno.mp3

    in the address bar

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    Re: Awakening-External World

    Quote Originally Posted by Michael A. Wiktor
    Hey, link worked fine for me. Very well done piece. Enjoyed the peaceful and well orchestrated opening themes and use of chromaticism and choice of wind instruments with the harp. Your crescendo worked well and sounds great with the brass and timpani. The repeat of the opening melody with the strings was a great idea and well executed. Nice pizzicato play and powerful ending... Your off to a great start with the GPO. Please keep posting....

    Michael
    thank you for your appreciations , i've other pieces ready, when i'll have time i'll post something else

  6. #6

    Re: Awakening-External World

    Couldn't get it to work either.


    ..Only linked to an Alter Vista web page.

  7. #7

    Re: Awakening-External World

    Quote Originally Posted by jsp2
    Couldn't get it to work either.


    ..Only linked to an Alter Vista web page.
    why don't you try to use >left button>save as...?

    (this is the first time i up my files in altervista, I hate it!)

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    Re: Awakening-External World

    Welcome, Downgrade, and a fine introduction of your work.

    Some fine writing in this, it shows much promise on the one
    hand, and much already learned and mastered.

    I look forward to hearing much more from you, Downgrade!

    My best,



    David
    www.DavidSosnowski.com
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