HI! I tried to listen to your 2nd attempt at this but I could not access the file for some reason so I am going to your first part on soundclick. I can appreciate the simplicity and the soft colours of your music. Well done! It is sort of like pastel colours! Very light and soft. I would prefer a little more development in some areas (ie: English Horn solo in the middle) All that will come as you move forward. I struggle with how much to develop things myself as well.