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    Forever

    I'll call this Forever but it used to be called I'll Be Here For You.

    I thought maybe some stronger lyrics could turn this into a decent torch song. It was written twenty years ago but I don't think it's too dated.

    Interestingly, it uses the same four chords though the song except at the end of the chorus but you don't notice it. I had it critiqued by songwriters back then and the music was quite acceptable.

    I added a little to the intro and ending and it has a little trouble figuring out which way to go but it finally gets it's bearings(maybe a Garritan Forum first ).

    http://www.mydocsonline.com/pub/fast...21/Forever.MP3

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    It's a very nice tune. I would like to hear it with the lyrics. Do you have a version with the lyrics?

    "Forever" is a very pleasant piece. Thank you for sharing!

    Ted
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    Re: Forever

    Thanks Ted.

    I use to have some lyrics for this tune but I don't think they had that spark. If you're trying to place songs with recording artists they are looking for something special in a song lyric, something unique.

    I just wanted to prepare it for the ear of a good lyricist. So it's the Hollywood Strings playing it right now.

    Phil

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    A strong ballad, Phil, very well done writing.

    Phil, I, too, would like to hear this with lyrics.
    I could really hear this belted out by a rich,
    vibrant female vocalist, for instance...

    You've got a real touch for this kind of song,
    Phil; be great if you could hook up with a singer
    to get the full effect!

    Best,

    David
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    Re: Forever

    Quote Originally Posted by etLux
    A strong ballad, Phil, very well done writing.

    Phil, I, too, would like to hear this with lyrics.
    I could really hear this belted out by a rich,
    vibrant female vocalist, for instance...

    You've got a real touch for this kind of song,
    Phil; be great if you could hook up with a singer
    to get the full effect!

    Best,

    David
    www.DavidSosnowski.com
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    I'm glad you liked it David.

    I used to have lyrics for it, and they were pretty good but not really good. I would always struggle with the lyrics but the music was always easy for me. Maybe I can impress a talented lyricist enough that they will bet on a dark horse.

    I'll just have to pursue it and maybe i'll have something a little more evolved to post here.

    Phil

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