Would any of you kind people have time to advise me how to improve my first substantial GPO rendering ? It’s a scene-change which I originally composed a few years ago for a dramatisation of Jane Austen’s Northanger Abbey. While vast clumps of unwieldy furniture are shuttled on- and off-stage, the somewhat feeble heroine Catherine Moreland has been banished from the gloomy grandeur of Northanger Abbey and is on her way back to her very humble home (hence change of instrumentation at the end), feeling sad.
All advice very welcome and very necessary. Thanks !