Hi All -
I'm flitting in briefly to get some feedback on two pieces I am working on for a film score. It's difficult to describe the plot without giving it all away.
Broken Shore 01
Broken Shore Pregnant Talk
The first piece (Broken Shore 01) is actually two scenes put together:
A man is dreaming about what it will be like to play with his son in a playground. This then segue ways into the man and woman doing the dishes in the kitchen and endearingly enjoying each other's company.
The 2nd piece (Broken Shore - PregnantTalk) is when the woman tells the man that she is pregnant. In the scene he thinks it through and decides he wants to keep the baby too.
I cannot yet put parts of the film up. Also, this is not at all final.
What I'm hoping you can help with is some feedback on the mix and the realism of the instruments. While I'm improving with GPO, I'm not quite there yet.
Sorry for the long-windedness. Thanks for any and all feedback.