I've been working on this one for 2 weeks. You've commented, and given suggestions. I implemented some, and politely ignored (but appreciated) others.
Here it is again, after another long long day of composing. I'm worn out again. But my energy will replenish after a good nights sleep and I'll be ready to start again. I hope you enjoy.
My main focus was the beginning few minutes, the back half of the piece hasn't been tampered with too much. Thats tomorrow effort.
Thanks for the comment. Both good and bad are always welcome. I perfer honesty to sugar coating. I guess its all those relationships I've been in that makes me feel that way.
PS. I am also aware for those who are sticklers, that in the Mahler-esque section in the middle, I used a GM Snare (oops) instead of the Basic OrchPerc Snare. Yes. I am sorry about that, later versions will haveit corrected.