Once again, I am attemping to learn this nostalgic Amaricana/Copland type music. It's driving me crazy! I keep getting lost. But something within is pushing me to learn this. I've posted my horrid attempt here:
Am I trying too hard you think?
It's called, The Dreamer. Which, if you heard the last The Dreamer attempt--this is totally different. I'm trying to add more tension/anticipation in my lower note choices ( as someone mentioned before and thank you), but I am having a difficult time. Any help would be great. Plus, I am writing two songs at once. This and The Water Fay Suite. So, my brain is moooosh.
And thank you all once again for helping me with my earlier attempt ( One Man, One Life ). I can't belive the reviews I've recieved. I think that song is flat out horrible!
Take care all,