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    Senior Member rwayland's Avatar
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    Why?

    Why did I write such an ucharacteristic (for me) piece? I don't know, but here it is.

    Amaral


    Richard

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    Quote Originally Posted by rwayland
    Why did I write such an ucharacteristic (for me) piece? I don't know, but here it is.

    Amaral


    Richard
    These days in your country/state are quite upset, so that must the reason.
    Sometimes the right hand fades away too much. Have a look at it, please.


    Raymond

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    Re: Why?

    Quote Originally Posted by Raymond62
    These days in your country/state are quite upset, so that must the reason.
    Sometimes the right hand fades away too much. Have a look at it, please.


    Raymond
    I expect that you mean where the melody is in the bass, and the right hand is playing the block chords? I meant that to be very soft, but it is possible that I made it too soft. I will investigate it soon as I have some more French Roast coffee.

    The fires here in California are at least 500 miles from here, so we are in no danger. My brother and his sons are in the fire area. My brother is in La Jolla, coping mostly with smoke and fumes, and an anxious wife with alzheimers and other disorders. His son was evacuated, but returned home next day, and it appears that the fire is now somewhat less virulent.

    Richard

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    I thought it was a very introspective piece. And I say that not really knowing why I said it. That's just the way it strikes me. Nicely done. I like it.
    --gary shannon
    Spooks! - The Movie

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    This is a great piece, Richard ! Eventhough you did warn us that this is "uncharacteristic" of your music, I was still pleasantly surprised with the beauty of this. It still has your uniqueness. I love this. Thank you !
    Kind Regards

    Louis Dekker
    My Music Site

    Pour être grand, il faut avoir été petit.

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    A tonal piece from you. Well generally anyway. It sounds nice. A nice inventive approach (the interaction of the two hands). Nice job.
    -Jay

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    Uncharacteristic? This has got Wayland written all over it, my
    friend -- I would know this was you inside of the first four measures.
    (Okay, okay; maybe eight... lol.) For those writers who truly do
    have a unique style, a genuinely individual way of thinking about
    music... perhaps that simply cannot be obscured, no matter intent.

    My best,



    David
    www.DavidSosnowski.com
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    Wayland
    I do not think that this is uncharacteristic? I think it is beautiful.....even some of the left turns you take in the middle......I just think every once in a while you need to do something a little different than your used to so that what comes next will be just that more important......

    Cliff
    three year old E machine
    GPO Sibelius Edition (now Liberated!)
    GPO Personal Orchestra
    GPO Jazz Band
    2 Classic Guitar Degrees (or so I was informed)
    Not a lick of sense!

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    Very Mellow and it turns oneself inward. Then just past middle there seems to be a bit of anger in there. Just for 5 or 6 bars. Neat!! Then back again to introspection.

    Nice little piece!!

    Well done

    Ron

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