I agree with previous comments about pedalling - it can be tricky at first to "catch" the notes you want to sustain, but not let them crash into the next harmony. I used to spend quite a long time with my piano students teaching them the basic coordination of hand and foot for syncopated pedaling.
(Syncopated pedaling is accomplished by raising and quickly re-depressing the pedal just as, or just after, notes are struck, but before the keys are released. This overlapping pedal technique allows for a seamless
As a piece, it was well worth listening to. I'd love to hear it played on the Steinway (can't WAIT to get one!).
Thanks for sharing.