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    Smile I'm back

    Folks I'm back from my holiday break
    Bet you all had a lot of heartache
    Never fear now I'm here
    Full of hope this New Year
    That my limericks will continue to have the right number of syllables and rhyming pattern, particularly in the last line!

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    Re: I'm back

    Quote Originally Posted by AlanPerkins
    Folks I'm back from my holiday break
    Bet you all had a lot of heartache
    Never fear now I'm here
    Full of hope this New Year
    That my limericks will continue to have the right number of syllables and rhyming pattern, particularly in the last line!
    Hello Alan and welcome back.

    Very impressive last line. So well balanced and weighted with appropriate syllables and good rhyming
    Michael
    Patience is a virtue, sensitivity is a gift

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    Re: I'm back

    Welcome back Alan! We missed you!
    We had a severe outbreak of what Gary called "acute limerickosis" and your absence was most conspicous!

    A Limerick ailment refined
    Infected this forum so fine
    Anapests and dactyls
    Caused us poetic thrills
    And spontaneous outbreaks of rhyme!

    Welcome back! Happy New Year!

    -- Karen
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    Scores at: http://stores.lulu.com/ke_peace

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    Re: I'm back

    Welcome back Alan!

    Looks like a limerickfest may be coming soon.

    My best,

    Gary

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