Hi All,
A couple of months ago I got some feedback on this site about a short piece I did and since then I have redone it. I tried incorporating most of the suggestions that people made.

You can hear the track on my myspace page: http://www.myspace.com/scorewritermusicproductions

The track is called "The Intruder Take 2." The original is still up there as well and is just called "The Intruder."

So I'd love to get some feedback on the redone track and maybe some comments comparing the original one and the redone track.

I appreciate your comments!