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    Andromeda W.I.P. Edited 2-18

    Andromeda, started this like an hour ago, hope to finish it this weekend but no promises. Just wanted to bounce my ideas off you guys. Lot of knowledge to be shared in the listening room. Please tell me what I could do better. I'd work on it more, but I have to go watch Dimitri Martin. Damit anyway

    Andromeda
    http://www.box.net/shared/ndxxfqjgg0


    Andromeda
    Yours Truly,
    TubaJediMaster
    May the Fourth Be With You

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    Re: Andromeda W.I.P.

    You've got some golden material bubbling in this clip,
    Ben. (Maybe a little more attention to the transition.)
    Very nice writing in it -- your characteristically
    strong thematic material.

    Now that you've given us the first minute... how about
    the next five? Looking forward to it!

    My best,



    David
    www.DavidSosnowski.com
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    Re: Andromeda W.I.P.

    Quote Originally Posted by tubajedimr View Post
    Just wanted to bounce my ideas off you guys.
    I feel this is a very nice beginning of music. Only thing I wish to have is some more length for one to soak into the music.

    Sincerely,
    Jun Yamamoto
    Tokyo, Japan
    http://jun.music.coocan.jp/
    MIDI AND SAMPLING TECHNOLOGY HAS OPENED AN ENTIRE NEW WORLD OF MUSIC!

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    Re: Andromeda W.I.P.

    i promise guys im working on it. haha. i was in a hurry. really wanted to do so much more to it earlier in the day, but i had to go to this thing. but tomorrow will be giving it more attention.
    Yours Truly,
    TubaJediMaster
    May the Fourth Be With You

    My demos:
    http://www.box.net/shared/ejtluyupfb

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    Re: Andromeda W.I.P.

    Tuba

    This is very impressive for just an hour's worth of work. It takes me that long just to get everything started and set up right.

    Well done

    Ron

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    Re: Andromeda W.I.P.

    It sounds like the beginning of an attractive piece of music.

    You always come up with such nice pop flavored mixtures. You know how to catch the ear.



    Phil

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    Re: Andromeda W.I.P.

    It sounds like the beginning of an attractive piece of music.

    You always come up with such nice pop flavored mixtures. You know how to catch the ear.



    Phil

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    Re: Andromeda W.I.P.

    Thanks for all the nice comments. I re edited it. I have the minor section that you heard before temporarily edited out. I wanted to kind of mess with the beginning a little longer, and give it some more melodic depth. So listen to it again if you like, and see what you think?

    http://www.box.net/shared/ndxxfqjgg0
    Yours Truly,
    TubaJediMaster
    May the Fourth Be With You

    My demos:
    http://www.box.net/shared/ejtluyupfb

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    Re: Andromeda W.I.P.

    I like this quite a bit! The only thing I would suggest is working on the snare sound to try and attain a bit more of a realistic sound, especially on the crescendo part (I think that's what it's called, I'm a composition noob). I am a total newbie with GPO and this sort of composition in general, so I am quite impressed as it is... I don't really see anything else wrong or know how to fix what I mentioned. Quite catchy.

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    Re: Andromeda W.I.P.

    Beautifully rendered. Very cinematic. I'm not sure I would identify this with a galaxy, but a great sounding piece.

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    Jack

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