On the performance side, could I suggest more dynamic variation (maybe terraced dynamics), and try to shape the phrases to make the meter (12/8?) a bit clearer. You could also pay a bit more attention to bringing out the different voices in a more polyphonic way - again, on the performance side.
Again, theres definitely some good material in there!
Thank you very much for your encouragement, guys.
LarryGAlexander - I used VSL Solo Strings in this piece. It's amazing what the technology of today is able of doing,isn't it? Some ten years ago making a virtual orchestra recording with the same level of realism was impossible.
As for a GPO recording challenge, I readily accept it. Let's see what comes out of it.
EricWatkins - you've been very,very kind to me. Thank you.