Listened to the second version of this, Sunny; a well
done Folk-Rock tune... liked it!
Now, you know this isn't an area of music I'm immersed
in, particularly -- but, given that, I liked the sound and
feel of this.
In ancient times, I listened to quite a bit of this genre,
and occasionally sat in with the bands playing in the
college towns where I went to school. Some of them
were quite good, and this material compares favorably.
I might suggest a little cleanup on the first few seconds
of intro and closing.