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    Intro to act two of Swan Lake

    Hi All

    Just finished with a version of the introduction to act two of Swan Lake.

    http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6777901

    Done with Finale and GPO, any suggestions for improving this piece would be gratefully accepted.

    Cheers...

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    Hello!

    You definitely followed the original to a T. My one little bitty suggestion would be to add some reverb--particularly to soloing instruments. I think it would add some wonderful depth to your rendering of this revered theme.

    Good job--that's a LOT of work!
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    Re: Intro to act two of Swan Lake

    Hi Jeni.

    Thanks for your kind words.

    I'll play with the reverb settings to try and add more depth.

    cheers...

    Daz :0)

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    Re: Intro to act two of Swan Lake

    Very well done, Daz! Well balanced, well executed,
    well rendered, and very well interpreted.

    With Jeni, though, I agree that the rendering would
    benefit from more work with reverb... a little more
    effort in this area, and this will be quite stunning!

    My best,



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    Re: Intro to act two of Swan Lake

    Hi David.

    Thanks so much for the comments. I'm chuffed that you liked it that much.

    I'm still playing with the reverb settings and trying to get a bit more depth to the instruments.

    Thanks again

    Cheers...

    Daz :0)

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    Re: Intro to act two of Swan Lake

    Darrob

    Very well done here. Nice rendering and nicely executed piece.

    Ron
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    Re: Intro to act two of Swan Lake

    Hey Daz,

    What would he sound like if alive and using GPO like us?
    Well, question answered! And thank you!
    A wonderful rendering! I also agree with the above statements about reverb and such, but that is very minor. Maybe work on different attacks or articulations of each section as well.

    Much enjoyed!


    M
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    Re: Intro to act two of Swan Lake

    Hi Daz,

    Some other responses have already addressed the reverb suggestion, so I can leave that out and just say... well done! It's a gamble to take on rendering such immediately recognizable classics, but you've done an outstanding job. Great work!

    Danny

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