Okay, I posted a very early version of this a few weeks back for comments, and got a lot of useful input. I want to thank everybody who commented for their advice. I'd also like to thank Scott McCallister for being willing to take his own free time to offer detailed advice and even do some re-working with me. Thanks a lot.
If you remember the original version, you should notice a lot of differences. Again, this is a traditional Celtic song called "Fairy Dance", and the melody line is played by a flute until we can record the the lyrics, sung by my wife's lovely alto voice. I have a demo version in which I sung the lyrics, but I really can't sing so I'm not going to post that one. (grin) The lyrics are about (surprise!) somebody who spends the night in the country and witnesses fairies dancing around their ring.
Anyway, here's my offering, and I hope you like it. Here it is, my first composition.