After the successful first collaboration between Dan Kury and myself about a month ago, I have not stopped feeding him material. These are works I had written a while back but decided to revise them, it's amazing how much we can improve in 1 year. And after that 1st step Dan took over, making everything sound better, polishing all the corners, I suspect he uses Pledge, not sure!
So I'd appreciate any comments you may have. Thanks.
1- "Sadness of Sauron"