Hi Jan, I think the rules of the listening room are that only one piece is supposed to be on the "front page" at a time, to give everyone a chance to have their work in view for awhile. Things sometimes move pretty fast here and one's composition can move right off the front page in a very short time.
That said, I listened to your pieces, and actually preferred the first two to the last one. I enjoyed your melodies and renderings much more in those two.
The slam of the keys at the end of the first piece must have been a teenage thing?
Good work on these pieces. Maybe you should edit your post and add them one at a time over a week or so. Thanks, John