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    Vision of you

    LOng time since I wrote a straight rock tune so here goes. I know that the lead guitar at the end is sloppy. THis is my best attemp given talent limitations. Would love thoughts, criticism and praise for songwriting, performance and mixing.

    Uses Garritan Stradivari and Gofriller.

    Thanks

    http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemus ... dID=405294
    http://www.myspace.com/sunnyzaman

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    Re: Vision of you

    Wow, very good Sunny!
    Yes, needs a bit of "polishing"; but has great potential. Your melodies, and especial vocal harmonies during the chorus, were excellent. Very "catchy"
    and "memorable".

    Nice work.

    M
    "...Wiktor's a Jekyll-Hyde personality..." - Lycos Music
    http://www.miserymadebeautiful.com

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    Re: Vision of you

    Hi, Sunny - It's good to see you here again.

    This is sloppy? Didn't sound so to me!

    As Michael commented, this is catchy and fun. Pop really, not rock as you've designated it, as far as that goes.

    On headphones, which exaggerates the stereo field, things were waaaay spread out, one guitar at the extreme left, back up vocals sometimes way over there too. On speakers of course the wide field wasn't as noticed.

    I enjoyed!

    Randy

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    Re: Vision of you

    This is quite a flashback - it reminds me a lot of a band from the 80's called the Split Enz and a few other bands from the same period. I quite enjoyed it.
    Trent P. McDonald

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