Great work el-russo - I've had a lurking listen to you before and I think you're getting better all the time!
You're very 'exposed' writing this sort of music, and not a lot of people can do this I think. A minor quibble, I think it deserves some more beautiful playing in the second half, but I really dont want to detract.
If people tell you 'youve got to be more contemporary' don't listen - your musical thinking will be all the stronger when you set off into your own style, for having worked on this for a while. Thats my proverbial 2 cents...
Thank you guys for listening and appreciation.