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    Demo of my first song - Help me improve!

    Hello,
    http://dev.mdpad.com/images/inspiration.mp3


    I have spent sometime reading this board and I decided to compose a song. I would love some feedback and tips on string writing.

    Thanks a lot!

    NewComposer

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    Re: Demo of my first song - Help me improve!

    I think that you should have used \"pan.\"
    I feel that every instrument except percussions sits at center.


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    Re: Demo of my first song - Help me improve!

    One word: TUNING!!! But composition-wise it seems like you are doing well - but what\'s with the crackling - sounds like some of it comes from a record...


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    Re: Demo of my first song - Help me improve!

    <BLOCKQUOTE><font size=\"1\" face=\"Verdana, Arial\">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by Simon Ravn:
    One word: TUNING!!! But composition-wise it seems like you are doing well - but what\'s with the crackling - sounds like some of it comes from a record...

    <HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

    My SB LIVE....can\'t figure out how to get rid of it when recording GigaStudio..


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