I haven't heard the original so can't compare the mix, but this is a really evocative soundscape! It's like a voyage of discovery through the ghosts and echoes of some long forgotten metropolis!
Great use of an imaginative chord sequence to keep the progression going through the 'tour', and the textures and ambience really create an air of mystery and space.
In short - great work!
I can easily hear the changes in the mix, great new feel to the bottom-end and you have created more depth, also I liked the percussion. Particularly enjoyed the way it starts, really quite a sound you have there.
Thanks for sharing this updated version!
I really like the vibe of this one. It gives me the feeling of a great relief or being saved from
a horrible situation. Perhaps a chopper ride home after being stranded in the worst place.
And you really appreciate the people flying the chopper and and feel a greater bond
with the human family. Seeing the good in everyone despite our imperfections. Thats the
vibe this one gives me. Thanks for sharing. I think its a great sound although it does
distort on my headphones and speakers.
All the best