Peter! I remember you - Good heavens, it's been a long time.
I enjoyed your "General," it has a pleasant, memorable melody. Recording feedback--the incessant drum seemed to predominate a bit too much, and the stereo spread of the strings seemed too narrow. If the piano could maintain its own slot in your panning scheme, I think the balance would be more clear. An experiment with pulling the reverb down a tad could be worthwhile also.
I liked the General. It's a romantic, lush latin piece.
It does have some sonic issues, especially that pounding drum. Maybe you should use a light snare drum or another percussion instrument if you want some rhythm to it. At least vary the beat so it doesn't sound like someone is using a hammer back stage.
This could be a very attractive piece with some editing.